Looking In

Wednesday, July 04, 2007

Looking In: Deep Inside


You look at me and see the boy
who struggles in his life to find joy
Everyday is just me and him
looking and walking in the dim

He smiles and laughs in sorrow
a disguise just to put on a show
Deep inside he wants to be a hero
but afraid to let it come out and show
and to let everybody know

Hiding himself inside of me
being cautious of what he sees
afraid of getting in jeopardy
He goes through it slow and steady

I'm like this, I've always been
somebody outside looking in
posted by dauzz at 11:21 PM

9 Comments:

FANTASTIC JOB!
I LOVE YOUR POEM!
PLEASE DO WRITE MORE OF THESE!!!

July 6, 2007 at 5:05 PM  

Hey man that's a really cool poem! didn't know u were gd at writting those...Haha...

July 7, 2007 at 1:56 AM  

Dude you're awesome!!
I really like this poem!!
It really reflects a certain someone!
do write more dude!
am gonna read!!

July 7, 2007 at 2:32 AM  

thankz DUDES....HA!
will try and make more if i have time kz...

July 10, 2007 at 8:26 PM  

I LOVE THIS POEM!
Really touching and honest!

July 10, 2007 at 8:27 PM  

its nice lah!!! i like it!!!

July 11, 2007 at 6:49 PM  

BUAT LAGI!!
BEST BEST BEST!!!
YOU'RE THE MAN!!!

July 15, 2007 at 9:01 PM  

ARRRR ITS JUS SUPER NICE SIA!!
can i borrow some phrases??
plzzzzzzz its soooo nice...
write more lah!

July 22, 2007 at 1:45 PM  

Hahah thankz everyone..
ya HL Milk (heheh) u can take SOME if u wan...haha

July 22, 2007 at 1:46 PM  

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